Been following this for awhile, and enjoying it very much. Good story. Good plotting, good writing. It's a shame the show didn't go on a lot longer and pick up more good fanwriters, but there are a few of you out there, and I'm glad of it.

I really love the way you've blended supporting elements of book canon into the TV-verse; the introduction of Ebenezer McCoy in this chapter made me grin, for instance; I loved the idea that TV-Harry still got to spend time on his farm learning about the morals of magic, because seriously, with only Bob and Justin around, Harry really did need a solid, positive influence in his life. Also, the presence of Ramirez in the story was very fun.

I did spot one teeny error in this chapter you may want to fix, though:

"proceeded and followed them in" should be "preceded and followed them in".