This is great!
Young Harry is just like a kid (in his very unique circumstances) should be - part scared out of his wits, part traumatized, part hormones and giddiness, part loving, and part immature little prick. <3

Favorite bits:
*The mentions of Elaine. I've just started the fourth book now... and I love how you are using both universes to weave your tales. Both are lovely, but together ... they just completely rock. <3
*Bob. How can I not love your Bob. He's Bob. Plus, his "sorceress" and "wizard" semantics were great. :)
*How just like a kid Harry is. Kids are really hard to write, but I'm not at all surprised you've got them down pat. I'm sure your Mini!Dresden verse was a bit helpful for that. XD

Great, great fic.
Thanks for posting it.
<3