When you're writing time in a story, what sort of formatting is grammatically correct? For example, I'm having a character give the timeline of a crime. He says 2 AM to begin with, which is fine, but after that he's going to drop the 'AM', because you don't tend to keep saying it when you're talking. So how do I write time after that? Would it be -
"I got the call around 3." (which looks weird)
or
"I got the call around three." (Which looks more like a number than a time.)
If it were in description, I'd keep the AM, but in dialogue it just sounds repetitive.
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Supposedly this includes times, which always look funny to me in any form. I have agonized over this same thing many times, and ultimately found ways to keep times out of it at all... but when I do stick times in, they ususally look like this:
"I got the call around 3:00."
BECAUSE... I'm just too lazy to write out three o'clock.
Hope this helps!
Angie