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Grammar question...

  • Oct. 8th, 2008 at 6:56 AM
royalsongstress: (Default)
I've Googled this, but haven't be able to find an answer or didn't have the right phrase to find it.

When you're writing time in a story, what sort of formatting is grammatically correct? For example, I'm having a character give the timeline of a crime. He says 2 AM to begin with, which is fine, but after that he's going to drop the 'AM', because you don't tend to keep saying it when you're talking. So how do I write time after that? Would it be -

"I got the call around 3." (which looks weird)
or
"I got the call around three." (Which looks more like a number than a time.)

If it were in description, I'd keep the AM, but in dialogue it just sounds repetitive.

I've posted this to [livejournal.com profile] grammargeeks too, but I don't know how active it is. Anyone have a better grammar question community?

Completely off-topic: [livejournal.com profile] donutsweeper found me a Canadian spellchecker for my Firefox and it's awesome! When I turned it on, Googled suddenly became a word (the US one had it underlined) and it didn't try to correct 'dialogue' (the US always wants it to be 'dialog'). Yay!

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[identity profile] draickinphoenix.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 8th, 2008 01:10 pm (UTC)
I don't know how correct this is, but I was taught that any number under 100 should be written out.

Supposedly this includes times, which always look funny to me in any form. I have agonized over this same thing many times, and ultimately found ways to keep times out of it at all... but when I do stick times in, they ususally look like this:

"I got the call around 3:00."

BECAUSE... I'm just too lazy to write out three o'clock.

Hope this helps!